My favorite port of the story is wen the girl gave the cat a cupcake. The cat said that he wanted some sprinkles.So the girl gave the cat some sprinkles.The cat made a huge mess. I think I liked that port because I think that port was funny. I think how the cat was feeling is happy.because he got a cupcake!
L.C
good job with details
ReplyDeletecb
Maybe next time try a harder book.
ReplyDeletejm
Maybe you could add more details. And Who is the girl?GOOD JOB! 4th grade RK
ReplyDeleteI think you did a great job explaining how the cat was feeling.
ReplyDeleteGREAT JOB.you add a few more detals and chek your spelling.4th grade CR
ReplyDeleteLC,
ReplyDeleteI have this book at home! Have you read any others in the series?
Dear LC,
ReplyDeleteI have not read this book, but it seems like a fun book. Would you recommend it? This book reminds of If You Give a Mouse a Cookie.
EKC
Dear L.C.I think your comment is good! You really put Detail in your story! I like how you put a picture in the readers mind. And how you tied things togther.
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To lc why do you thank it is funny
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