Friday, December 11, 2009

New ending.

In Ruby Hollar, Dallas and Florida ( the two trouble twins) ran away from their foster parent's. Tiller and Siary's real kids came home to vist their parents,and so I think Dallas and Florida are feeling pretty sad.And so I think my new ending might be Budy & Lucy are happy to see that their parents have adopted Dallas & Florida & there would be no welcome home bacon,& Dallas & Florida woulden't have run away in the first place.E.C.
Posted by Bobcat Student at 10:01 AM
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  1. Bobcat StudentDecember 14, 2009 at 12:09 PM

    check you spelling

    cb

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  2. Bobcat StudentDecember 14, 2009 at 12:14 PM

    @ E.C
    Who were Dalles and Florida's real parents?

    N.M

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  3. Jeff LewisDecember 17, 2009 at 9:00 PM

    EC,

    A story has to have a problem. If they had never been kidnapped in the first place would it have been interesting to read? (We, of course, don't want people to get kidnapped in real life...).

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